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雅思口說考試準備過程中需要增強語句表現力,跟大家簡單介紹雅思口說增強表現力的五大技巧:

◈ 雅思口說增強表現力技巧一:避免使用語意弱的“be”動詞
1、把句中的表語轉換為不同的修飾語。例如:

Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉換為前置定語)

Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (轉換為並列結構作後置定語)

 

2、將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變為行為動詞。例如:

1) Weak: The team members are good players.
→ Revision: The team members play well.

2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
→ Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

 

3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中,把“be”動詞後的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。例如:

1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
→ Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
→ Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

 

◈ 雅思口說增強表現力技巧二:多用語意具體的動詞,保持句意簡潔明瞭
例如:

1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
→ Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
→ Better: She compares prices and quality.

 

◈ 雅思口說增強表現力技巧三:儘量運用主動語態
例如:

1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
→ Better: Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
→ Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

 

◈ 雅思口說增強表現力技巧四:防止使用語意冗長累贅的詞語
例如:

1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
→ Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
→ Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
→ Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
→ Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

 

◈ 雅思口說增強表現力技巧五:杜絕濫用陳舊詞語或難懂的專業術語
例如:
1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
→ Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
→ Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

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