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03/13綜合寫作,閱讀部分給出三條理由來
解釋短命的Akkadian Empire覆滅之謎,而聽力則一一加以駁斥。
Topic 議題:the reason of collapse of Akkadine Empire

Sub-point 1
分論點1 Rebellion of conquered city
首先,閱讀認為,被征服的城邦不斷反抗,終於導致帝國瓦解。

聽力材料反駁說,Conquered cities have little chance to rebel, for their walls have been destroyed by empire army. They are easily defeated again.
這些叛軍根本無法對抗中央政府軍,因為被征服的城邦的防禦城牆早被拆毀,喪失防禦能力。

Sub-point2
分論點2
其次,閱讀指出,Bad weather results in shortage of food supply.
帝國北部地區的長期乾旱造成糧食減產,王國因此崩潰。
聽力則表示,Indeed, bad weather will lead to the reduction of food supply, but farmers in empire have advanced irrigation technology, which can bring water from long distance. What's more, farmers will preserve grains.王國的農業技術先進,能夠長距離的輸水灌溉,還有糧食儲藏技術,能夠解決糧食問題。

Sub-point 3
分論點3
最後,閱讀聲稱,Unfair trade leads to discontent of other countries. They united to fight against the Empire.
帝國跟其他國家經濟關係變差,引起國家解體。
聽力卻表示,Empire has been looking for new partners. Losses caused by some countries can be made up by resources and benefits from new countries.帝國跟很多遠方國家不斷建立新的貿易夥伴關係,始終能夠獲得新的資源。

範文:
The reading passage presents three reasons to account for the collapse of the short-lived Akkadian Empire established by Sargon, while the speaker thinks otherwise.

To begin with, the reading states that the rebellious conquered populations eventually set the empire apart. According to the lecture, however, the rebel forces in those conquered city-states could by no means fight against the army under the control of the central government, since Sargon had ordered his men to tear down the defense walls of those cities heoccupied.

The author argues that the lasting draught in the northern region of the empire led to the shortage of food and thus the downfall of the state. The professor refutes this argument by pointing out that the country, equipped with sound agricultural technologies, could carry water over long distance and store food for long time, thus coping with possible food problems.

Finally, contrary to the belief in the passage that the worsening trade relations with other countries resulted in the disintegration of the empire, the lecturer contends that the country was able to make contact with new trading partners in realms afar, such as those inIndian continent, which enabled it to have access to new resources. (200 Words)

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