上週獨立寫作完整版真題，老師都整理好了哦。
今天來和大家分享。
【解題步驟】
1.精準理解題目
想像你現在計畫著要休假，正在兩個地點間做抉擇。下面兩個選項你認為哪一個能給你提供幫助做決定的最有用的信息？為什麼？
--在網上閱讀地點的信息
--和去過兩個地點的人進行討論
2.找出關鍵詞，進行頭腦風暴
a)vacation
思考：人們在外出度假的時候通常會做些什麼活動？
參考答案：會去景點旅遊，觀賞自然風景；瞭解地區特色的人文知識，比如去當地的商舖瞭解當地特產，去當地的博物館瞭解當地歷史人物和事件；
b)information
思考：什麼信息會對度假有幫助
參考答案：有關旅遊地點的信息，比如風景區，有名的街道，博物館，可以使人明確旅遊的目標；有關當地的天氣，飲食住宿的情況，方便人安排行程；
c)reading online
思考1：在網上閱讀可以獲取到什麼信息？
參考答案：當地各類景點的詳細介紹；城市的歷史人物與故事；地區旅館的分佈情況；
思考2：在網上閱讀可能獲取不到什麼信息？
參考答案：一些景點的真實信息，因為他們可能名不副實，因為宣傳的原因被故意誇大；特色飲食只能看到介紹和圖片；交通情況如何乘車會比較籠統；沒有直觀的對比，單憑網上的信息很難做出對比。
d)someone who has visited both places
思考1：去過的人可以提供什麼信息？
參考答案：可以詳細說明去過的景點裡面到底有什麼，一些當地特色食物到底值不值得去嘗試；詳細介紹有關交通方面，住宿方面的情況，環境如何，一些景點怎麼乘車乘船; 可以對兩個景點的體驗做一個對比
思考2：去過的人不能提供什麼信息？
參考答案：沒去過的景點的相關信息；沒嘗試過的食物，沒去過的街區等相關信息；不感興趣的人文知識
3.形成分論點
Reading online：
1.在網上閱讀有利於對地區內的所有景點，飲食做一個全面的瞭解
2.在網上閱讀可以瞭解到地區的歷史人物和故事
3.在網上閱讀可以為住宿提供更多選擇
People who has visited both places：
1.和去過的人討論可以獲得一些景點的具體信息
2.和去過的人討論可以深入瞭解當地的住宿條件和交通情況
3.去過的人可以以自己的經驗對兩個地區進行比較
【範文】
While having plodded through the high-strength workdays, taking a vacation for people stands for a thorough relaxation both physically and mentally. Seeing beyond the mountainside towards a wide expanse of blue sky and grassland, the haunting anxiety and unease about the mundane life are shrinking gradually as if being carried away along with the breezy air. Certainly, savoring in the vacation could be ideal but laying the foundation of that before leaving for the journey could be as troublesome as the taints on the pearl. And it could be observed that sometimes even each family member is holding on their own view about the end of the journey. Regarding how to obtain the related information of travelling better, I prefer to read about the places online while deciding on which place to visit since the information online could be comprehensive and unbiased.
The information online offers all-inclusive details about almost all the sites at a certain place. Usually there are beyond a handful of options of sites in a city, especially for cities which are termed as travelling cities, no matter regarding places to visit or characteristic dishes to taste on. As a result, were people unconscious of all the choices in two cities before deciding on where to go, they might omit the scenes which could turn out to be really fitting for themselves after years no matter in which place of the two they finally spend their vacation. However, the information on the internet could be exhaustive because perhaps the managers of all the touring sites tend to diffuse their information online to attract the tourists. And thus, the foregoing unpleasant condition could be avoided if people could sail through the information online in preparation. Conversely, though a person who has visited both places might offer details of the places, hardly could their understanding of a place be as thorough as what could be gained from the internet since he or she certainly cannot have trampled on all the roads of each park and mountain.
In addition, the online information of places could convey history knowledge to the potential tourists. Asides from the natural landscape, the history serves as another weighty factors swinging people’s mind about their destination of the vacation. The relics of the ancient edifices, the traces of the historical events and the manor of the grand figures all could magnetize the travelers around the world. However, hardly could people learn about the history of the places from the mouth of another traveler who has been there since that specific person might not be interested to history and also usually people other than the history professors can retain little details. Conversely, the online information is easily accessible and it could cover all the historical figures and events in a chronological order, and hence the history-oriented people could make easy decision without weighing the scenery and the cuisines to which they have scant interest of the two places
To conclude, I believe the better method to decide on the prospective place for vacation is to reading the information online because it includes all the aspects of the places in great details. (524words)
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