托福寫作如何吸引閱卷官興趣 結尾段構成很重要
1. 再次陳述主題。用 paraphrase 方式再次呈現主題陳述中出現的三要素: a.問題中存在爭議的地方; b.觀點;c.理由。
2. 結束句。放在陳述完主題之後。
托福寫作輔導提出結尾段結束句的三種常見寫法：
一. 托福作文的最後總結教訓或提出建議
In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations to become successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed.
二. 提出令人憂慮的結果或可能出現的負面結果
假設讀者沒有想作者說的那樣去做，在結論中提出將會出現的負面結果，幫助讀者預見到令人憂慮的後果，進而令讀者自然第接受作者的意見。
e.g., To summarize, on one hand, for artists who are fortunate to profit immensely from their occupation, it is unnecessary for the government to offer additional financial incentives for them. On the other hand, government should provide financial support and appropriate policies to impoverished artists who engage in conventional craftsmanship because these are viewed as national treasure and cultural heritage of the country. If the government did not support those unfortunate traditional artists, the valuable conventional forms of arts would disappear very soon.
三. 提出問題留待讀者思考
In conclusion, it is inevitable for children to commit mistakes at a young age, parents should play their part to instill the importance of good behaviors in their children. Parents should allow children to make small mistakes as a meaningful learning experience. However, what would be like if parents permit their children to commit serious mistakes like theft and robbery?
結尾段常用表達方式：
Finally, thus, in a word, in brief;
In conclusion, to conclude, in the end;
In the final analysis, in a nutshell, on the whole;
To summarize, to encapsulate, in sum, in summary
In light of these facts, considering these ideas
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