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在練習GRE寫作的時候,同學可以結合一些備考的技巧,比如說合理地應用GRE寫作範本,尤其是剛開始備考GRE寫作的時候,借助寫作範本會更加容易,而後期可以逐漸完善自己的寫作思路。

👊一、開頭
  In the argument, the …(主題物件) recommends that …(對結論做論述,基本上可以抄原文,用另外一種方式表達即可). To support this recommendation the argument point out that …(說明文章用了什麼論據去證明觀點了,同上抄襲即可) however …This argument is logically flawed in several critical respects (說明這篇文章邏輯上是有缺陷的)。
👊二. 攻擊論據
1️⃣調查結果沒有證據申明
  To begin with, the argument depends on the assumption that… (闡述說出了一個沒有根據的申明,並說出文中的原因) —rather than for some other reasons. Yet it is entirely possible that… (說明這種猜測可能的原因) or some other factor. Without ruling out all other reasons why… (重述這個申明)…(說出反方向的結論)。
2️⃣提到了樣本,但是資料不具有代表性(資料不夠)
  Firstly, the author provides no evidence that the survey is statistically reliable. Perhaps the survey’s sample is not sufficient in size or representative of the quality of …(說明物件的數量和品質不夠) For that matter, this survey is not strong enough to establish causation between… (在這裡列出原因和結果,做比較) However, the other reasons of the survey which (敘述其他原因下的情況). As a result, without the evidence that the survey is statistically reliable the author cannot justifiably draw any conclusion by relying on this survey.
3️⃣猜測,但是沒有證據
  Thirdly, the argument assumes that… (闡述文中的猜測) However, the letter provides no evidence to substantiate this assumption. In fact, the letter suggests that this might be the case. By admitting that …, the letter implies that …說明影響他們happy的因素還有其他的方面,不光是研究中所列舉。
👊三.攻擊論證過程
1️⃣時間上的錯誤類比
  To begin with,…(陳述某個資料) may not a reliable date of that rate would be now(和現在相比較是不可信的). Perhaps the… (反例), For that matter, perhaps …(說出反例的情況下會導致何種結果). In short, without ruling out other possible reasons for …(假設說出針對反例應該怎麼做)the memo’s author cannot convince me on the basis of …(說出應該有的結論)
2️⃣兩個事實錯誤的類比
  Even if…(讓步,即使某個條件成立) the argument unfairly assumes that…(說明錯誤的類比的情況). It is entirely possible that the …(比較物件) own different situations. Perhaps …(具體說出反例) Without accounting for such differences between the two places is unreliable.
👊四.結論的攻擊
  Finally, the argument fails to consider …(有更好的辦法實現目標). Perhaps by…(辦法一), or by (辦法二), (對目標進行展望) In short, without weighing the suggestion against alternatives, it is unconvincing that (說明提供的方案不好)。
👊五. 結尾段
  In sum, the argument seems logical, but is based on nothing more than pure speculation and perhaps wishful thinking, yet lack of some warranted investigation.To strength it, the author needs to evaluate all possible alternatives and provide detail and comprehensive evidence before jumping to the conclusion that …

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