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1.結構不平行
例子:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.
將一系列的單字連接起來的時候,應當使用詞性相同或同一類型的片語。

 

2.不知所云
例子:Many companies began using computers mouth.

 

3.段落過長,不分段,主語與動詞一致性問題
例子:She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.
主語和動詞不一致。

 

4.句子彆扭
例子:We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.
措辭過長或不清。換言之,句子顯得滑稽可笑。

 

5.拼寫錯誤主詞、動詞或受詞有問題
例子:I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.
句子的基本結構有問題,缺少主詞、動詞或受詞,或者這些成分重複。

 

6.語氣與文章不符
例子:I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.
語氣與文章其他部分不相符,可能是過於正式或者太不正式。

 

7.代名詞指代不明
例子:If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.
代名詞所取代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。

 

8.過於籠統
例子:We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.
句子或者所表達的意思過於籠統,不能提供多少資訊。

 

9.動詞時態錯誤
例子:Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.
動詞時態不正確,檢查一下是應該用現在時、過去時、將來時或者是完成時等等。

 

10.多餘的介係詞
例子:I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.
在表示這種意思時此單字不能與介係詞連用。這種情況常見於downtown,home,there,here等字。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞,因而不能在它們前面添加介係詞。

 

11.跑題或不相關
例子:There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.這個與okay for children to fail sometimes.所表達的意思很普通,大多數人都已經知道了,因而就沒有必要再說出來。

 

12.標點問題
例子:I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.
許多學生在句子中使用了太多的句號,尤其是當他們用手寫的時候。

 

13.重覆冗餘
例子:Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.
一種意思的表述不止一次,或者某個詞語不必要。

 

14.單數/複數
例子:Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.
單字需要從單數變為複數,或者由複數變成單數。單數可數名詞不能單獨使用,應該將其變為複數形式或者加上限定詞(a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。

 

15.不要使用縮寫
在正式的寫作中不要使用縮寫形式(can’t,don’t,it’s,we’ll,they’ve等等),而應當使用單字的完整形式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。

 

16.關聯詞語重複
例子:Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.
不能在該句的主要主詞和主要動詞前使用連接詞。

 

17.句子不完整
例子:Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school.
句子沒有主要主詞或主要動詞,因為其實它應是一個從句。這是一個非常常見的錯誤,修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。

 

18.不要使用get
例子:When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed.
get太不正式,意思也過於含糊,不適合用在正式的場合。應將get改為一個更加具體的單字,如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。

 

19.書寫難以辨認資訊不正確
例子:I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.
傳遞資訊不正確,或者讓人聽起來覺得可能不正確(如果確實是正確的,應當解釋為什麼這樣,因為讀者不認為是正確的)。上述例句中,all的意思是百分之百,我們不能絕對地說每一件新東西都是從美國誕生的。為保險起見,應當使用many或most。

 

20.選字不恰當
例子:I was late getting home because I lost my way.
在這種情況下不應該使用該字,可選擇更好的詞語。

 

21.單字形式不當
例子:I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.
所使用的單字的形式不正確,檢查一下應該使用該字的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。

 

22.用詞錯誤
例子:Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.
用詞錯誤或在此種情況下該詞不是最佳用詞。

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