✔要想讓自己的GRE作文寫的更具有渲染能力，就要靈活運用一些語法和可能簡單但很地道的表達方式。下面就為大家進行GRE作文句子技巧的介紹，教你如何增強文章的表現能力，取得GRE寫作好成績。
一、避免使用語意弱的“be”動詞。
1、把句中的表語轉換為不同的修飾語。例如：
l Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
l Revision: The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉換為前置定語)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (轉換為並列結構作後置定語)
2、將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變為行為動詞。例如：
l Weak: The team members are good players.
l Revision: The team members play well.
3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中，把“be”動詞後的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。例如：
l Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
l Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
二、多用語意具體的動詞，保持句意簡潔明瞭。例如：
l Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
l Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
三、儘量運用主動語態。例如：
l Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
l Better: Charity has supported the organization.
四、防止使用語意冗長累贅的詞語。例如：
l Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
l Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語或難懂的專業術語。例如：
l Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
l Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
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